深澤詩(shī)詞同題407期漁陽(yáng)十二法的第二法郝好 <p class="ql-block">第二法：</p><p class="ql-block">前兩句說(shuō)一事，第三句以轉(zhuǎn)折連詞承接。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">示例：</p><p class="ql-block">王士禎《虎山擅勝閣眺光福以雨阻不得往》</p><p class="ql-block">虎山橋畔盡層松，掩映寒流古寺紅。</p><p class="ql-block">卻上重樓看鄧尉，太湖西去雨蒙蒙。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">譯文：</p><p class="ql-block">虎山橋邊盡是層層疊疊的青松，</p><p class="ql-block">掩映著寒流下古寺墻壁的褐紅。</p><p class="ql-block">但登上檀勝閣重樓遠(yuǎn)眺鄧尉山，</p><p class="ql-block">只能看到西去太湖的細(xì)雨蒙蒙。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">常用的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系連詞如：卻是、卻見(jiàn)、縱然、縱使、但是、雖是、然而、而、偏偏、只是、不過(guò)、至于、致、不料、豈知、惟有等。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">王國(guó)章</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎新春</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉龍歸匿九霄云，值歲金蛇即日臨。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雖是天寒飄瑞雪，臘梅依舊報(bào)新春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">李 健</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">詠曹植</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">煮豆燃萁千古奇，相煎只為霸靈基。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然無(wú)欲也無(wú)命，七步吟成不死詩(shī)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劉立權(quán)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶 感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">半生學(xué)語(yǔ)半學(xué)噤，耳畔嘈嘈莫假真。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲斷江湖迷世卷，忽聞童子吐清音。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">許志軍</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">無(wú) 題</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雖是紅塵車馬鬧，清修凈地鳥(niǎo)雀鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">吳鉤帶月邊關(guān)意，酒綠燈紅市井情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">趙志謙</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">游少林</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">腳踩蓮花步步升，石階踏步快如風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然禪武留千載，難忘名君唐太宗。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翟振軍</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春 草</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">二月楊林雀影稀，禿枝好似少生機(jī)。?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">誰(shuí)知細(xì)看枯蓬下，一簇鵝黃換綠衣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">許俊喬</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">自 嘲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕陽(yáng)起步結(jié)詩(shī)緣，晝夜癡迷冬夏連。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯獨(dú)不知功底差，笨人還想傲華年。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">張占軍</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滹沱冬望</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">逶迤滹沱浴雪飛，天成玉練每相違。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然掬得幾清淖，猶患當(dāng)年鷸不歸。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">郭瑞云</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">小寒吟</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">冷氣襲人透領(lǐng)肩，匆匆行客厚衣添。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欣然梅朵枝頭俏，似把春音喜訊傳。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黎習(xí)會(huì)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">思 鄉(xiāng)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">他國(guó)千里遠(yuǎn)，生計(jì)且茫然。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">卻見(jiàn)梅花落，思鄉(xiāng)又一年。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">楊慶田</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">哀弘一</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">送別長(zhǎng)亭似有情，哀哀婦孺泣無(wú)聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然一棄完塵念，難辯人倫私令名。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鄒建龍</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣魚翁的苦惱</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">手軟身疲半晌余，突然浮動(dòng)始眉舒。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">偏偏飛過(guò)白毛鷺，叼走抗?fàn)庛^上魚。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">王喜長(zhǎng)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三九寒天</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">季轉(zhuǎn)深冬三九天，村翁曬暖拒嚴(yán)寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然氣候多凌冽，難擋眾集歡趣談。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">李 靜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">辭舊迎新</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">屠蘇送臘笑顏開(kāi)，爆竹迎新福祿來(lái)。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷震云霄驚草木，桃紅十里接春回。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宋彥波</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">錢江觀潮有懷</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">日日東流千百條，一經(jīng)入海任逍遙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">思?xì)w唯有錢江水，烏咽頻掀回岸潮。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黎守強(qiáng)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">讀憫農(nóng)詩(shī)感懷</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">粒粒盤中米，朝朝苦與辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">偏偏憫農(nóng)者，卻是讀書人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袁東謙</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">問(wèn) 天</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三九鋪銀未見(jiàn)痕，氣清燥干病毒吟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然貪吏該懲治，寒季別偏愛(ài)眾心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">李同振</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">臘梅贊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 眾語(yǔ)贊爭(zhēng)先，獨(dú)道嫌遲慢。不看黃花早墜枯，臘月姍姍艷。 莫論報(bào)春功，只譽(yù)寒中綻。無(wú)悔黃蜂未認(rèn)親，六辦常相伴。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秦彥麗</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">安康第一</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">塵世繁華熙攘行，身心苦累利名縈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">然而老病才知悟，唯有安康福貴稱。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">劉彩英</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天山雪蓮</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">冰姿冷艷峻崖邊，脫俗離塵宛若仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱使高寒無(wú)客賞，芳華依舊在山巔。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袁會(huì)欣</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">閑 吟</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">年近古稀兩鬢白，初心依舊賦情懷。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">黃昏未必夕陽(yáng)好，一卷詩(shī)書擷取來(lái)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">王洪澤</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬日街景一瞥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">動(dòng)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)繞全城，灑水車忙交錯(cuò)行。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱是經(jīng)冬天未雪，街頭依舊可滑冰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高國(guó)珍</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">無(wú) 題</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">耳順之年兩鬢斑，歸鄉(xiāng)卸甲欲清閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然趣勢(shì)時(shí)髦趕，跳舞吟歌似燕翩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白亞紅</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">北方草原有感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒冬鳥(niǎo)獸藏，舉目是荒涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">卻盼回飛燕，攜春到北疆。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">李士彬</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">自 嘲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蓬間一雀幾多情，誤入詩(shī)林夢(mèng)不驚。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱使吟毫新句少，八哥允我和啼鶯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">王英山</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">久別探鄉(xiāng)有感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">花鮮樹(shù)綠路街寬，座座新房映眼簾。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">總是一心尋舊跡，誰(shuí)知唯有夢(mèng)中還。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">馬久愛(ài)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">嘆流年</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">節(jié)氣倏忽小大寒，臘八過(guò)后又新年。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱然用盡拔河力，哪個(gè)能留此刻間？</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">張 雷</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">賀燕趙青蓮詩(shī)社成立</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">心有鳴骹堪裂云，少年曾夢(mèng)蕩胡塵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三千萬(wàn)字廿郎賦，二十余秋豐劍身。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉臥小舟眠柳幄，閑邀明月入山筠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">猶能一遂青蓮意，作個(gè)飄然來(lái)去人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">王彥奇</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">無(wú) 題</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">舊日街喧連臂娃，人群熙攘度年華。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今盡掩柴門去，唯剩阿翁獨(dú)守家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">信偉義</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">觀飛奪瀘定橋</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">江河咆哮阻千帆，橋板無(wú)情避九天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">縱使上蒼失慧眼，孤身鐵索戰(zhàn)雄關(guān)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">刁紅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">聽(tīng)《遼闊的草原》有感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">悅耳歌聲響，悠悠駿馬鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">豈知誰(shuí)喚我，馳騁草原中。</span></p>