習(xí)作交流（六）原創(chuàng) <p class="ql-block"> 初學(xué)詩(shī)詞，偶有習(xí)作，意在交流，懇請(qǐng)方家和讀者不吝賜教。</p><p class="ql-block"> —— 桃源來(lái)客</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">放 炮</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乖巧妮兒放炮喧，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">小盆被炸上青天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">惹得親友歡聲笑，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">快樂(lè)鄉(xiāng)村過(guò)大年。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b>村北初逢</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">白雪紛飛小麥青，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">巖芯勘探過(guò)奇兵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">餐風(fēng)沐雨雄心在，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">情暖家國(guó)萬(wàn)里程。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">元 宵</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">火樹(shù)銀花南魯香，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">人流如水賞燈光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">更欣廣場(chǎng)喧歌舞，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">不夜天中樂(lè)小康。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">春 雪</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">上元晨起雪連天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬(wàn)里相思月應(yīng)圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">走過(guò)看山三境界，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">心田安泰是福田。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">祈 愿</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫步元宵念夜空，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">嬋娟回望巷燈紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">離別牽系千秋事，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">天上人間共大同。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">五律. <b style="font-size:22px;">春 雪</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">潤(rùn)物細(xì)無(wú)聲，光熙耀世明。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿林驚鵲語(yǔ)，入寺伴佛燈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">麥蓋三層睡，豐收四季生。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">紅塵雖過(guò)客，處處寄深情。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七律. <b style="font-size:22px;">女人花</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">——獻(xiàn)給三八婦女節(jié)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春花爛漫遍天涯，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">婦女如花興大家。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">清照論詞千載秀，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">木蘭征戰(zhàn)萬(wàn)人夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">山歡水笑風(fēng)和順，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">物阜民豐景麗佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">攜手并肩同筑夢(mèng)，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">前程錦繡燦朝霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">夜 攝</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">杏樹(shù)花繁格外鮮，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜來(lái)伴月映藍(lán)天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑遐相對(duì)門前賞，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">不擾蜂蝶釀蜜甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">晨 攝</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">清晨慢步尋圖畫，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">處處和諧處處佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">胸有朝陽(yáng)人不老，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">天高地闊賞紅霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">長(zhǎng)相思. <b style="font-size:22px;">游山西道寶河村</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 望山頭，上山頭，攀繞河街古跡稠。歡心欲放喉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 大魚(yú)游，小魚(yú)游，水庫(kù)清波無(wú)盡悠。影搖漁墅樓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">天凈沙. <b style="font-size:22px;">游道寶河村</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">深山險(xiǎn)路新芽，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">小橋流水人家。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">老醋盈攤漫話。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕聲問(wèn)價(jià)，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">買回憨笑如花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">濱河公園</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">十面繁花爛漫情，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">里廂鳥(niǎo)聚欲飛鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春光明媚人游矚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)送芬芳滿沁城。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p>