習(xí)作交流（五）原創(chuàng) <p class="ql-block"> 初學(xué)詩詞，偶有習(xí)作，意在交流，懇請方家和讀者不吝賜教。</p><p class="ql-block"> —— 桃源來客</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">城西湖</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">清波浩瀚映長天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">十里環(huán)堤景色鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">昔日高樓林立處，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">飛鷗旋鶩鳥聲喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">望 斷</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">白煙一股下青天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑問臨凡哪位仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">閬苑瑤臺同日暖，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">古今最美是人間。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">過 年</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">歡鬧人間樂不休，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">寂嘿地下念冥幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">除夕焰火天中綻，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">思顧雙親淚暗流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">民間高手</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">沿路鴻福向遠(yuǎn)山，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春節(jié)臨近盼團(tuán)圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">農(nóng)家自有農(nóng)家樂，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">誰賦懷才一片天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">五絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">散 心</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">嚴(yán)寒身影單，獨步覓奇觀。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">白雪飛天邈，長河落日圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">出 攤</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">張燈結(jié)彩迓新年，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">集市書聯(lián)筆友歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">不計得失龍鳳舞，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">只求學(xué)用釀心甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>?</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">憶過年</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">生意清閑望上天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">為何愈少寫春聯(lián)？</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">印刷制品千家送，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">緊蹙眉頭手冒煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>?</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">上市場</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">書聯(lián)賣畫上街頭，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">友贊朋夸笑語稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春意融融歌盛世，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">師徒市場寫風(fēng)流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">贊陳霞</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">學(xué)畫一年成色佳，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初登市場賣別家。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">雖說價款無稱貴，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">鳥語花香你我他。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>?</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:18px;">七絕. </span><b style="font-size:22px;">南魯新歌</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜氣洋洋廣場來，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">歡歌曼舞樂開懷。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">龍年南魯行鴻運，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">恭祝家家發(fā)大財。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p>