習(xí)作交流（四）原創(chuàng) <p class="ql-block"> 初學(xué)詩詞，偶有習(xí)作，意在交流，懇請(qǐng)方家和讀者不吝賜教。</p><p class="ql-block"> —— 桃源來客</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">感謝袁宗一老師提供視頻</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕.<b style="font-size:22px;"> 西安趣事</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)詩陌路為何由，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">口若懸河今古流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">腹有藏書千百卷，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">周游天下笑聲稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">年 夜</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">鞭燃遠(yuǎn)處映紅天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">前夜聲聲后夜連。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">冷淚盈積空羨慕，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">上層富戶過新年。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">喜 慶</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">地覆天翻幾度秋，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">李莊街口起牌樓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">歡歌未盡鞭聲唱，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">煙霧蒙蒙笑語稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">伍王李莊</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾禱平安祭伍王，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">如今華夏盡輝煌。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">李莊新歲牌樓立，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜地歡天慶小康。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕.<b style="font-size:22px;"> 楓 葉</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">高處難登命不強(qiáng)，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨(dú)居僻境喜陽光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">經(jīng)霜沐雨雖滴淚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一樣嫣紅十里香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕.<b style="font-size:22px;"> 木蘭歸</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">赴戎萬里為爺娘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">壯士十年歸故鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">西閣更衣云鬢理，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">當(dāng)窗對(duì)鏡貼花黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">年 景</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">紛紛白雪落蒼穹，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">地暗天藍(lán)棉更紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲末家家揚(yáng)喜氣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">枝頭處處掛燈籠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. </span><b style="font-size:22px;">殘 荷</b><span style="font-size:22px;">（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">形孤影寡度寒冬，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">甜藕含絲藏水中。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">待到夏天花映日，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿塘碧葉滿塘紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">母 親</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">常喜吾兒得坦途，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">艱難苦恨任孤獨(dú)。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">茫茫前路蹣跚邁，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">小狗忠誠親似初。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">平 湖</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃河之水沁陽流，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源解旱憂。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">今建平湖連命脈，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">來年農(nóng)業(yè)大豐收。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">題圖. <b style="font-size:22px;">希 望</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">茫茫大地炫初陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">朝氣蓬勃向遠(yuǎn)方。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫道豐收行路早，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">人生最貴是時(shí)光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">人模狗樣</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一朝富裕露猖狂，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">膽大潑天巧偽裝。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">忍看橫行多擋路，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">何時(shí)猛虎掃平陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;"> 寵</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">城中發(fā)富笑天堂，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">寵物如兒著盛裝。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">父母老家辛度日，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">十年添過幾身裳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">噴 灌</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">濺玉飛珠舞上蒼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">心存壓力志高揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">任憑四季常無雨，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一樣秋來糧滿倉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b style="font-size:22px;">月 夜</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">旅社豪華非故鄉(xiāng)，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">臨窗望月柳絲長(zhǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">合同簽就施工緊，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">猶念爹娘在遠(yuǎn)方。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">七絕. <b>采風(fēng)去</b>（新韻）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪閃銀光耀地天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">中原萬里兆豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">忽聽村外歡聲起，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">直向田園山水間。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">圖片來源：呂法鐵/網(wǎng)絡(luò)</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">背景音樂：《雪中情》飛絮飄雪</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">編制時(shí)間：2024.1.15</p>