“己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫…”?下面我們用語文的角度來細(xì)品此文阿杜（攝狼） <h5>來源:網(wǎng)絡(luò)</h5><h3></h3> <h3><font color="#010101"><p style="text-align: center;">視頻:武漢往事</h3></font></h3> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b> 韓退之說，不平則鳴。這次疫情，激發(fā)了體制內(nèi)外高人的鳴放之心，創(chuàng)作了非常多的文體各異、風(fēng)格多樣的文學(xué)作品。目前流傳最廣，也最信息化的，或許是“己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫"一文，制成了很多小視頻，甚至還有書法家為之創(chuàng)作。</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><br> 筆墨當(dāng)隨時代。如此洛陽紙貴的時文，是極佳語文教學(xué)素材。為此，著意網(wǎng)絡(luò)搜尋一番，發(fā)現(xiàn)好幾個版本。因?yàn)闆]有找到最早出處，也就不明先后順序，羅列如下，并點(diǎn)評之：</b></h1><p style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"></h3> <h3><font color="#010101"><p style="text-align: center;">視頻 : 己亥末 庚子春</h3></font></h3> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><span style="border: 0px; line-height: 25px;">其一</span>：</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><font color="#222222"> 己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫，染者數(shù)萬</font><font color="#ed2308">記</font><font color="#222222">。眾惶恐，舉國防，皆閉戶。南山出，復(fù)守江漢，將萬余白衣郎中力抗之。月余，仍不退。唯期九州一心，國泰民安。</font></b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><br><font color="#222222"> 此文中有錯別字“數(shù)萬</font><font color="#ed2308">記</font><font color="#222222">”當(dāng)為“數(shù)萬</font><font color="#ed2308">計(jì)</font><font color="#222222">”，表示統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字?！澳仙匠觥币痪洌瑫r人皆知“南山”指鐘南山院士，但從行文來說也好，尊敬也好，便于后人閱讀也好，全稱更好?！皬?fù)守江漢”一句，“復(fù)”字引歧義，不明實(shí)情者，以為鐘南山院士再次守江漢?？计涫?，應(yīng)指2003年之非典，時隔十七年復(fù)出防疫。“</font><font color="#ed2308">白衣郎中”一詞不妥</font><font color="#222222">，西方有“白衣天使”之說，多指護(hù)士；“郎中”為國人的醫(yī)生稱謂，且多指民間醫(yī)生。此詞中西雜揉，但沒有準(zhǔn)確表明援鄂醫(yī)護(hù)人員身份。文章結(jié)尾既陳事實(shí)“月余不退”，又表作者心意“期九州一心”，心存希望，明天會好。</font></b></h1> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><span style="border: 0px; line-height: 25px;">其二</span>：</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b> 己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫，染者數(shù)萬計(jì)。眾惶恐，舉國防，皆閉戶。南山鎮(zhèn)守江南都，率白衣郎中數(shù)萬抗之，且九州一心。月余，疫盡去，國泰民安，舉國慶之......</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><br><font color="#222222"> 此文與前文有所不同?！?lt;/font><font color="#ed2308">南山</font><font color="#222222">”一句，”</font><font color="#ed2308">鎮(zhèn)守</font><font color="#222222">“一詞欠妥，鐘南山院士非地方軍政長官，無鎮(zhèn)守之職權(quán)。若</font><font color="#222222">有意用此，當(dāng)別有深意?！?lt;/font><font color="#ed2308">江南都</font><font color="#222222">”一詞不準(zhǔn)，江南一說唐代有“江南西道”，范圍在江西、湖南及湖北、安徽南部，武漢在湖北南部，屬于這一范圍內(nèi)。但是，“都”之說費(fèi)解，武漢是江南西道的行政中心？還是武漢是古都？</font></b></h1><h3><b><br></b></h3><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><font color="#222222"> 此文結(jié)尾頗為浪漫，樂觀預(yù)計(jì)“月余"時間。不過，疫去之后，“</font><font color="#ed2308">舉國慶之</font><font color="#222222">”似不可取，這么多患者，這么多逝者，這么多逆行者，這么多痛苦，豈能不痛定思痛？</font></b></h1> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><span style="border: 0px; line-height: 25px;">其三</span>：</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b> 己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫，染者數(shù)萬計(jì)。眾惶恐，舉國防，皆閉戶。南山鎮(zhèn)守江南都，率白衣郎中數(shù)萬抗之，且九州一心。月余，疫盡去，國泰民安。</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><br><font color="#222222"> </font> <font color="#222222"> </font><font color="#222222">與上一版本不同之處在于，將“</font><font color="#ed2308">舉國慶之</font><font color="#222222">”刪除了，可見心意。在巨大的公共事件面前，結(jié)果的勝利并不能讓逝者魂兮歸來，也不能撫慰失去親人者的痛苦，唯愿國泰，唯愿民安。</font></b></h1> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><span style="border: 0px; line-height: 25px;">其四</span>：</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><font color="#222222"> 己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫，源食野，恰逢年節(jié)，染者數(shù)萬計(jì)，眾惶恐，舉國防，皆閉戶，街無舟車，巷無人煙，以隔新冠。南山</font><font color="#ed2308">鎮(zhèn)守江南都</font><font color="#222222">，率白衣郎中數(shù)萬抗之，時九州一心，青絲，白發(fā)，皆身先士卒；布衣，商客，皆爭先解囊；政醫(yī)兵者扛鼎逆行為之勇戰(zhàn)矣，能者皆竭力之。月余，疫盡去，華燈初上，國泰民安！</font></b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><br><font color="#222222"> 此文較前甚為詳細(xì)，講到了疫情之源起，但“</font><font color="#ed2308">恰逢年節(jié)</font><font color="#222222">”一句純屬多余，因?yàn)殚_篇即介紹了時間?！?lt;/font><span style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); border: 0px; line-height: 25px;">青絲，白發(fā)，皆身先士卒；布衣，商客，皆爭先解囊；政醫(yī)兵者扛鼎逆行為之勇戰(zhàn)矣，能者皆竭力之</span><font color="#222222">”句，甚好，文字簡約而有畫面感。</font></b></h1> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><span style="border: 0px; line-height: 25px;">其五</span>：</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b> 己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫，染者數(shù)萬。眾惶恐，舉國防，皆閉戶，道無車舟，萬巷空寂。然外狼亦動，垂涎而候，華夏腹背芒刺。幸龍魂不死，風(fēng)雨而立。醫(yī)無私，警無畏，民齊心，政者、醫(yī)者、兵者，扛鼎逆行勇戰(zhàn)矣。嘆山川異域，風(fēng)月同天；豈曰無衣，與子同裳。能者竭力，萬民同心！月余，疫除，終勝。此后百年，風(fēng)調(diào)雨順，國泰民安.......</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; line-height: 25px; border: none; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><br><font color="#222222"> 此文較之于</font><font color="#222222">前，更顯宏大敘事，國有疫情，外有豺狼，“華夏腹背芒刺”，</font><font color="#222222">但</font><font color="#ed2308">有主觀臆斷之嫌</font><font color="#222222">，似乎“</font><font color="#ed2308">外狼</font><font color="#222222">”有意為之。真相如何，日后知曉?！皣@山川異域，風(fēng)月同天；豈曰無衣，與子同裳”句，明顯受日本援助之刺激，若言國際援助則失于狹隘，或言文化自信則過于敏感，竅以為是贅句。“此后百年，風(fēng)調(diào)雨順，國泰民安”句，主觀意愿太強(qiáng)，“國泰民安”只要執(zhí)政為民一以貫之還是能實(shí)現(xiàn)，</font><font color="#ed2308">一百年內(nèi)風(fēng)調(diào)雨順如何可能</font><font color="#222222">？經(jīng)此一疫，還不知自然力量之強(qiáng)大嗎？</font></b></h1> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><span style="border: 0px; line-height: 25px;">其六</span>：</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b> 己亥末，庚子春，荊楚大疫，染者數(shù)萬，眾惶恐，舉國防，皆閉戶。道無車舟，萬巷空寂。然外狼亦動，垂涎而候，華夏背腹芒刺。</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><br></b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b> 幸龍魂不死，風(fēng)雨而立。醫(yī)無私，警無畏，民齊心。政者、醫(yī)者、兵者，扛鼎逆行勇戰(zhàn)矣！商客、名家、百姓、仁義者、鄰邦，獻(xiàn)物捐資。嘆山川異域，風(fēng)月同天，豈曰無衣，與子同袍。能者竭力，萬民同心。月余 ，疫除，終勝 。此后百年 ，風(fēng)調(diào)雨順，國泰民安。</b></h1> <h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><font color="#222222"> 此文較前文，</font><font color="#ed2308">唯多一句</font><font color="#222222">“商客、名家、百姓、仁義者、鄰邦，獻(xiàn)物捐資”。竅以為，既有“醫(yī)無私，警無畏，民齊心。政者、醫(yī)者、兵者，扛鼎逆行勇戰(zhàn)矣”，</font><font color="#ed2308">一定要有</font><font color="#222222">“商客、名家、百姓、仁義者、鄰邦，獻(xiàn)物捐資”，</font><font color="#ed2308">否則如何體現(xiàn)“緊緊依靠人民”</font><font color="#222222">，如何體現(xiàn)共同戰(zhàn)“疫”？</font></b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b><br> 最后有幾個問題：文章為什么沒有題目？能否取個恰當(dāng)?shù)念}目？文章為什么沒有提到患者和逝者？以上六篇，你最喜歡哪一篇？為什么？</b></h1><h1 style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><b style=""><br><font color="#222222"> </font><font color="#ed2308">一千個讀者，就有一千個哈姆雷特。期待爭鳴！</font></b></h1><p style="margin-top: 17px; border: none; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); line-height: 25px; max-height: 100%; overflow-wrap: break-word; text-align: justify; list-style-position: inside; list-style-type: square; font-family: PingFangSC, STHeiti, "Microsoft YaHei", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; 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